Friday, August 29, 2008

John's Creative Writing Story

John wrote the story below for a creative writing assignment. This picture was his story starter. The picture is from a painting by Landseer and is titled Saved.
Saved
by John Springs
Once upon a time there was a lake in the middle of Kansas named Moose Lake. A little girl named Lisa entered a fishing competition with her family and friends. She wandered off to the other side of the lake hoping she would catch more fish because the others weren't catching many fish. Lisa slipped on a rock and fell into the lake. Max, Lisa's friend's dog, ran quickly around the lake. Max jumped into the water and pushed Lisa onto the land. Lisa's dad follwed Max and helped save her.
The End.

3 comments:

Valerie said...

That is a great story John. Keep up the good work in school!

Valerie said...

Gramma Pam left the last comment...I (Valerie) think it is a great story too! Good job John!

kimby said...

Great job John! From the Chases!